The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018
The next line graph illustrates the
behavior
cost of five specific foods in England, namely Change the spelling
behaviour
bread
, milk
, cereal, marmalade
and chicken
between the years 1993 and 2018.
Overall
, in both years 1993 and 2018 the most important behaviours were the high cost of cereal and chicken
wings, which had important changes was
the Unnecessary verb
apply
milk
rose dramatically while
bread
remained in
the lowest cost in 2018. The fluctuations of the Change preposition
at
marmalade
were slightly
and changed to the third to Change the word
slight
second
cheaper position.
Between 2003 and 2008, we can appreciate two contrasting changes, Add an article
the second
a second
meanwhile
the value the Add a comma
meanwhile,
chicken
wings and cereal drop
steadily the other Wrong verb form
dropped
ingredient
rose in different Fix the agreement mistake
ingredients
proportion
. Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
On the other hand
, between 2008 and 2010 the effect was contrary, whereas
chicken
wings and cereal increase
, the Wrong verb form
increased
marmalade
and milk
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
except
the Add the preposition
except for
bread
, which its
Correct pronoun usage
apply
continued
grow until 2018. During Add the particle
continued to
this
period is important to highlight the soar steeply
of cereal up to 2018.
Rephrase
apply
On the other hand
, in 2013 the milk
and bread
overcome
the Wrong verb form
overcame
chicken
wing and marmalade
, respectively. However
, in 2018 the situation changes
and Wrong verb form
changed
chicken
wing and marmalade
recovery
their position in values of 2.2 and 1.4, respectively. Replace the word
recovered
In
Change preposition
On
contrary
Add an article
the contrary
of
Change preposition
apply
that
, the value of the Correct pronoun usage
apply
milk
and bread
were positioned in
2 and 1.2Change preposition
at
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bread, milk, marmalade, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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