The diagram below shows the production of olive oil
The given picture gives information about the steps and equipment involved in the process of making olive oil.
Overall
, the process has a number of different stages starting from picking up fruits and ending with storing and saling
oil.
The first stage is when the farmers Correct your spelling
selling
selecting
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select
collecting
fruits which meet their requirements. After that, these collected products will be rinsed in cold water and Wrong verb form
collect
then
running
through a belt. In the third step, people will smash and classify them into olive paste and olive stones.
Following that, both olive paste and olive stones which are divided above will be put into many small bags with holes. Once packing in bags has finished, the machine is able to start pressing. The sixth step is when the employees use the equipment to separate them into 2 parts, namely oil and water. Eventually, the final items will be transported to the sellers to be stored and to trade with customers, who are in need of them.Wrong verb form
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