Government investments in the arts such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree
According
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According to
this
prompt, government
is investing Add an article
the government
money
for
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in
arts
for example
music drama and cultural shows instead
of countries
public services. Change noun form
the country's
However
, I totally disagree with this
statement due
to Change preposition
because
arts
can be represented
a major Wrong verb form
play
roll
in countries Correct your spelling
role
such
as it is helps to
mental health and Wrong verb form
helping
socail bahaviour
.
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social behaviour
of
humans Change preposition
apply
feeling
. It helps to Wrong verb form
feel
reduse
mental health Correct your spelling
reduce
such
as stress, anxiety and any kinds of mental issues. When people suffering
from these various problems art is the Wrong verb form
suffer
antiboitic
for every situation. Correct your spelling
antibiotic
antibiotics
For instance
, every country has a
cancer patients and heart patients and music is the best way for their treatment like Correct article usage
apply
that
playing Correct pronoun usage
apply
violin
and Change the article
the violin
listen
that music. Wrong verb form
listening to
Therefore
government
should Correct article usage
the government
expending
their Verb problem
spend
money
for
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on
arts
.
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the arts
On the other hand
, general
attitude and behaviour of every single person is Correct article usage
the general
the
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a
vial
part of a country. Correct your spelling
vital
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violence and criminality. Poetry is the best example Correct your spelling
reduce
for
that because they talk directly to Change preposition
of
the
their nation to Remove the article
apply
bulid
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build
uo
attitudes Correct your spelling
up
on
their minds. Change preposition
in
For example
, S. Mahinda thero
and Change the capitalization
Thero
Mahathma
Gandi Correct your spelling
Mahatma
is
the best artists forever, who spoke to the Change the verb form
are
naions
. They write poems and it Correct your spelling
nations
nation
is helps
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helps
to
social behaviour.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
government
should spend Add an article
the government
money
to
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on
arts
and culture, because, it always take
part Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
of
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in
peoples
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people's
crusial
time. Yearly budget Correct your spelling
crucial
government
can divided
their Wrong verb form
divide
money
for arts
as well as
public services. Consequently
art combined with social and person individually and we must take hands for their Add a comma
Consequently,
gorwn
in future.Correct your spelling
grown
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