You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter •describe the problem with the equipment •explain how this problem is affecting your work •say what you want the shop or company to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
epistle to complain about the wireless headphones that I bought recently from your store.I am unable to connect my laptop to the headset which is impacting my work. The Sony wireless headset that I purchased from the store
is
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not operational perfectly fine
from
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last
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15 days, the battery only
last
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for half n hour.I
perfomed
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performed
every troubleshooting that I
can
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perform like
I read
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manuals online and
also followed
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the steps to reboot it ;
however
, the problem persists.
Initially
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I thought the issue
is
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with charging, I plugged in the charging overnight but no luck.My mother has
same
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the same
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headsets
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,
her's
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works fine. The problem is affecting my work and I am unable to focus on my work.
Moreover
, when I speak to someone using the mic,
other
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person hears their own echo.
This
issue is not only making my job difficult , but
also
I am
loosing
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ample
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an ample
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amount of clients.I am totally dependent on
this
equipment.
Furthermore
, I have 2
months
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2-month
warranty left on
this
headset.I suggest
to replace
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the old
la[top
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laptop
and
provide
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me with a new one. Since I have two months warranty left on these headsets and
i
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would like to get a new one.I hope you will provide
a new headsets
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new headsets
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in
next
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few days. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Parul
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tone
Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter for consistency and suitability for the task.
task req
Address all three bullet points with equal development to fully meet the task requirement.
paragraphing
Ensure each paragraph contains a single clear idea and use linking words to improve the logical flow of the letter.
grammar
Correct grammatical errors and improve sentence structures for clarity.
accuracy
Check the accuracy of the information provided (e.g., confusion between replacing headsets and laptop).
closing
End the letter with an appropriate closing phrase to enhance the cohesive structure.

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