The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables compare the amounts of money gained from selling Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in

five

countries in Europe.

Overall

, sales of those goods mostly increased after

five

years, except for the figures for bananas in Sweden and Denmark. The

earned more money from both coffee and bananas than any other country in 2004. Looking at coffee’s turnover, Switzerland earned 3

million

euros

from selling

this

product in 1999, followed by around 1.5 and 1.8

million

euros

in the

and Denmark respectively. The lowest amount was recorded in Sweden at that time, with 0.8

million

euros

. After

five

years, the

became the biggest market, with its

sale

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sales

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reaching 20

million

euros

. The other data grew

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apply

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by about 0.2 to 3

million

euros

only. Regarding bananas’ sales, the

always ranked top, recording 15

million

euros

in 1999 which rose threefold after

five

years. Switzerland and Belgium

also

experienced growth in their sales, to 5.5 and 4 respectively, but the opposite was true for Sweden and Denmark whose figures decreased by about 1

million

euro over the period.

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