The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
A glance at the provided map reveals the changes that
happend
to a town named Correct your spelling
happened
happen
Wilington
in 3 Correct your spelling
Wilmington
separated
years 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Replace the word
separate
Firstly
, it is evident that some places didn't
built in Verb problem
weren't
this
town until 2000, for instance
we can name shops, sports fields, schools and wetland
for birds.
Fix the agreement mistake
wetlands
Subsequently
, some places where were in each of these 3 years changed a mere marginally, for
example
there Add a comma
example,
were
a bridge which Change the verb form
was
build
on the river. Change the verb form
builds
On the other hand
figure of the homes indicates that building
were expanding and farms disappeared Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
by passing
Verb problem
over
the
time. Correct article usage
apply
there
established a road Correct pronoun usage
They
in1860
and Change preposition
in in1860
then
extended to two in 2000.
overall
, we can see development throughout the town.Submitted by amirrezadelghandi3 on
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