The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
A glance at the provided map reveals the changes that
happend
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happened
happen
to a town named
Wilington
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Wilmington
in 3
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years 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Firstly
, it is evident that some places
didn't
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built in
this
town until 2000,
for instance
we can name shops, sports fields, schools and
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wetlands
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for birds.
Subsequently
, some places where were in each of these 3 years changed a mere marginally,
for
example
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there
were
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a bridge which
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on the river.
On the other hand
figure of the homes indicates that
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were expanding and farms disappeared
by passing
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the
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time.
there
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established a road
in1860
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and
then
extended to two in 2000.
overall
, we can see development throughout the town.
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