The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
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A glance at the provided map reveals the changes that
happend
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happened
happen

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to a town named
Wilington
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Wilmington

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in 3
separated
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separate

The word separated doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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years 1780, 1860 and 2000.
Firstly
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, it is evident that some places
didn't
Verb problem
weren't

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built in
this
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town until 2000,
for instance
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we can name shops, sports fields, schools and
wetland
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wetlands

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for birds.
Subsequently
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, some places where were in each of these 3 years changed a mere marginally,
for
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example
Add a comma
example,

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there
were
Change the verb form
was

The plural form of be were does not seem to agree with the singular subject a bridge. Consider changing the verb form.

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a bridge which
build
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builds

The plural verb build does not appear to agree with the singular subject a bridge. Consider changing the verb form for subject-verb agreement.

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on the river.
On the other hand
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figure of the homes indicates that
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings

It seems that building may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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were expanding and farms disappeared
by passing
Verb problem
over

There may be a verb use issue here.

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the
Correct article usage
apply

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time.
there
Correct pronoun usage
They

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established a road
in1860
Change preposition
in in1860

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and
then
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extended to two in 2000.
overall
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, we can see development throughout the town.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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