The table illustrates the expenses of advertising for four car companies in the UK in 2002

The table illustrates the expenses of advertising for four car companies in the UK in 2002
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All in all, four
companies
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spent a lot of money on TV advertisements,
while
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that of the cinema was the lowest. The advertising higher payment for advertisement was
Renault
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in five types: cinema, press, outdoor, radio, and TV. To
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with, for TV advertising, Cetirizine spent the highest amount of money with 70
million
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dollars, compared to those of the car
companies
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Renault
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, Rover, and
Vauxhall
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with 59
million
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dollars, $45
million
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and $65
million
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respectively for payment of the advertisement in the United Kingdom in 2002.
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opposed, the advertising for radio spent $15
million
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for four
companies
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while
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the cinema had the lowest expenses. For each of them,
Renault
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had $6
million
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and
Vauxhall
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had $5
million
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,
while
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Rover and Cetirizine had no expenditures for
this
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type. In terms of outdoor advertising,
Renault
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and
Vauxhall
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had equal expenditure, with 7
million
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, followed by Rover and Cetirizine, with only 2
million
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and 3
million
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, respectively. The expenditures for advertising on the press of four
companies
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were very unequal, with 45
million
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for
Renault
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and only 8
million
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for
Vauxhall
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.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words companies, renault, million, vauxhall with synonyms.
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