the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The floor plan shows the central

library

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which was built

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20 years

ago with different types and

classification

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of

books

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kept across different sections and rooms across each corner. Today the

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sections are more organized with good space for students to navigate across the

library

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, the

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is more structured and very spacious compared to the

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built 20 years ago Once you enter, there are tables and chairs arranged for students to read, Adjacent to that on the left-hand

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there is a section for adult fiction

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and on the

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side

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you can see the

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which is the adult nonfiction

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. So, on the left

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of the fiction

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section, you can see the

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for

CD’s

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, videos and computer games. The other

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which is on the other

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which is near the

entrance

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is the

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for reading news

paper

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and magazines. On the

right

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of the

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, you can find the enquiry desk for tickets

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returns, etc, The other

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is where you can find

children

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books

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to that, The new

library

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doesn’t have tables

chairs

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or chairs

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at the centre and

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it has

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in the children’s fiction

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area and it is located

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entrance

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and there is a reference

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section below and there is a computer

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below which is at the left

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of the

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. There is a café on the

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side

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of the

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and adjacent to that it has the information desk and

self service

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machines. On the extreme

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corner from the

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entrance

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you can see the lecture

room

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