the diagram shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

The floor plan shows the central

library

which was built

20yrs

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20 years

ago with different types and

classification

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classifications

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of

books

kept across different sections and rooms across each corner. Today the

library

sections are more organized with good space for students to navigate across the

library

Overall

, the

library

is more structured and very spacious compared to the

library

built 20 years ago Once you enter, there are tables and chairs arranged for students to read, Adjacent to that on the left-hand

side

there is a section for adult fiction

books

and on the

right

side

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you can see the

room

which is the adult nonfiction

books

. So, on the left

side

of the fiction

book

section, you can see the

room

for

CD’s

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, videos and computer games. The other

room

which is on the other

side

which is near the

entrance

is the

room

for reading news

paper

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and magazines. On the

right

of the

entrance

, you can find the enquiry desk for tickets

book

returns, etc, The other

side

is where you can find

children

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books

So

comparing

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to that, The new

library

doesn’t have tables

chairs

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or chairs

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at the centre and

instead

it has

sofa’s

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in the children’s fiction

book

area and it is located

on

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the top extreme left corner from

entrance

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and there is a reference

book

section below and there is a computer

room

below which is at the left

side

of the

entrance

. There is a café on the

right

side

of the

entrance

and adjacent to that it has the information desk and

self service

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machines. On the extreme

right

corner from the

entrance

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you can see the lecture

room

.