The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (line graph)
This
graph illustrates the percentage of families owning 4 types of high-tech devices over 20 years.
Overall
, this
figure experienced an upward trend. While
there was a significant changed
in Change the form of the verb
change
Mp
3 players, the opposite could be seen in tablets.
Standing at 18%, most of the Correct your spelling
MP
household
had Fix the agreement mistake
households
a
Change the article
an
Mp
3 player in 1995, whereas
the least belonged to smart phones
and tablets with 8%. Correct your spelling
smartphones
This
figure witnessed a gradual growth and reached 40% in 2015, the lowest. Similarly
, before sharing the same percentage at the end
of observed
period, at 8%, wireless Correct article usage
the observed
phone
and Fix the agreement mistake
phones
MP
3 player
with 8% have Fix the agreement mistake
players
a
same Correct article usage
the
staring
point and they both increased moderately.
On the Correct your spelling
starting
othe
hand, after computers Correct your spelling
other
appearing
in 2003, Wrong verb form
appeared
it
saw a considerable climb by 80% over 12 years and reached Correct pronoun usage
they
top
2, just after MP3 and mobile Correct article usage
the top
phone
.Fix the agreement mistake
phones
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