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The chart below shows the information on how frequently people in the USA ate in fastfood restaurants between 2003 and 2013

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The bar chart illustrates the frequency of people eating fast
food
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 in
restaurants
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 from 2003 to 2013 in the United States of America shown in per cent.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the community ate in fast
food
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restaurants
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 once a week and once or twice a month in 2003, 2006 and 2013. Regarding 2 activities with higher percentages, folk preferred to eat at fast
food
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restaurants
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 once a week and once or twice a month in 2003 by about 30%,
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, in 2006 has declined by 7% from 32% to 25% but it climbed up in 2013 by reached maximum peak 32%.
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, there was no negligible difference between eating junk
food
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 in
restaurants
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 several times a week or a few times a year, it showed approximately 15% from 2003 to 2014. Interestingly, the population in the United States of America have a low percentage of eating junk
food
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 at
restaurants
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 every day or never, it appears under 5% .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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