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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.
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The table gives information about the
percentage
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 of first-year
students
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 who gave a ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses: Economics, Law and Commerce.
Overall
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, the Commerce
that is
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 the
course
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 has the highest rate by first-year
students
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 for the resources provided at their college.
On the other hand
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, the Law
course
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 has the lowest percentages in the table. A deep analysis of the table provided reveals that Pre-
course
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 information of
course
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 Economics is rated lowest at 59%.
In contrast
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, the
percentage
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 of Teaching is highest at 95% of
students
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 rating “very good”. It is noticeable that the Pre-
course
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 information of the Commerce
course
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 is the same
percentage
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 as Teaching is rated a high
percentage
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 by
students
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 at 95%.
However
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, the low proportion of the resources provided by the college in the Law
course
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 with almost just under 80% and the lowest is Teaching at 62%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, students, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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