The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses.
The table gives
information
about the percentage of
first year
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students
who rated different aspects of their course as being ‘very good’.
Overall
,
students
studying Commerce appeared to be the most pleased with the
resources
provided by the college for their course. An average of 94% of
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students
studying Commerce found that their pre-course
information
, teaching, and
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were very good,
while
just over 80% found the printed
resources
and other
resources
to
also
be very good. Meanwhile, around 70% of Law
students
found their printed
resources
, tutor, and pre-course
information
to be
at
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a very good standard. Around 60% rated the teaching as being very good,
while
80% rated the other
resources
as very good.
However
, only 60% of Economics
students
found their pre-course
information
and other
resources
to be very good. The teaching and tutor were rated very good by at least 90% of
students
, compared to just over 80% who voted the printed
resources
as being very good
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