The bar chart provides information about the level of female unemployment in four parts of the United Kingdom between the years of 2013 to 2014.
The given graph illustrates women's
unemployment
rater
in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
In general, in almost all regions Correct your spelling
rates
unemployment
rating decrased
, Correct your spelling
decreased
excepting
Scotland, where Wrong verb form
except
on the contrary
, the indicators have increased.
We can see from the data that in Wales and Northern Ireland ratings were already low. By the
contrast, in England and Scotland Correct article usage
apply
unemployment
index Correct article usage
the unemployment
higher
or rather above 6 Add a missing verb
is higher
percent
. The smallest difference was in England, where indicators Change the spelling
per cent
reduced
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were reduced
only
Change preposition
by only
for
0,3 Change preposition
apply
percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, there are only for
0,6 Change preposition
apply
percent
ratings changed in Scotland, but Change the spelling
per cent
unmeployment
increased Correct your spelling
unemployment
comparing
to others.
Wales is one of two countries that has Wrong verb form
compared
rating
Correct article usage
a rating
less
than 6% and Change preposition
of less
unemployment
there decreased from 5,4% to 5%, that
is not the best result. Correct pronoun usage
which
Furthermore
, Northern Ireland showed the highest change, which decreased from 5,6% to 4,6%.Submitted by dnm.best on
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