Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the
last
two or three decades, technology has developed drastically, especially education
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in education
Computers
play a crucial role in education
at present and the
usage Change the word
their
are
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is
increased
, Wrong verb form
increasing
therefore
, in the future, teachers will not be needed to teach. I strongly disagree with this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, the professors
work will be not existed by Change to a genitive case
professor's
professors'
Computers
because computers
are set by the programs, it only delivers what already
set. The Add a missing verb
is already
teachers
role is not set by some programs, they have Change to a genitive case
teacher's
teachers'
own
sense to analyse and teach Correct pronoun usage
their own
to
students clearly without Change preposition
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getting
any Verb problem
making
mistake
. Fix the agreement mistake
mistakes
For example
, the
professor jobs are more Correct article usage
apply
demanded
in Change preposition
in demand
job
market Add an article
the job
in
around the world because they Change preposition
apply
are
only teach students properly. Unnecessary verb
apply
Hence
, computers
will not be dominated
the Wrong verb form
dominate
lectures
jobs in future.
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lecture
Furthermore
, when a person teach
in the educational Change the verb form
teaches
institutional
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institution
while
students can ask any doubts about Correct word choice
apply
in
their subject and they get a clear explanation from their trainers but it Change preposition
apply
does
not possible when Verb problem
is
computers
teach. For instance
, a
manpower should be needed for setting programs about Remove the article
apply
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the course
a course
course
in Fix the agreement mistake
courses
education
field, without manpower nothing is possible. Traditional Add an article
the education
method
of teaching Fix the agreement mistake
methods
must
Verb problem
are
need
for Wrong verb form
needed
student's
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students'
life
in order to Fix the agreement mistake
lives
they
enhance their career and knowledge Correct pronoun usage
apply
through
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apply
this
.
To conclude
, more and more usage of computer
means it will not dominate the teacher's role and job in the future. The Fix the agreement mistake
computers
trainers
work is Change to a genitive case
trainer's
trainers'
a
significant Change the article
apply
of
the Change preposition
in
education
sectors
. Fix the agreement mistake
sector
Therefore
, I strongly disagree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details and I hope this
trend drives more benefits to the learners.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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