The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in the are of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts shows how it was distributed.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in the are of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts shows how it was distributed.
The table and charts show the data on the police budget from 2017 to 2018. The table below illustrates which sources the money came from
while
the charts depict how that money was spent.
Overall
, it is evident that the police budget increased in the 2-year period and there are changes in the way it was spent. First and foremost, the amount of money from the national government rose slightly from 175.5m to 177.8m. One of the most remarkable changes is the Local Taxes sector which shows a growth of approximately 11m. Turning to the final source, the lowest expenditure, the percentage just grew 0,5m. In the pie charts, the highest percentage was the salaries with 75% in 2017 and 68% in 2018.
Although
in 2018 the salaries sector experienced a drop of nearly 5 %, it was still the biggest source.
While
there is a slow increase in technology, about 6%, buildings and transport remained the same number in the whole period
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