Woman can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many thing that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appropriated as much as men, although they have to sacrifice a lot to their family and career. What do you think?

well , these days and with the tremendous speed of everything around us , Buying things on the internet become more common and more
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compared to the past in my opinion: why
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their needs from the Internet is because it is the easiest way to
order
athorways
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people can
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anytime and any place just with one click you can find and receive what you ask for
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all these advantages we can apsullwtly find the disadvantages
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customer can not be sure about the size and most of them have
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size
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if they want to return the
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they just can not do anything with
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with if they go emidimmediately to the store
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