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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%).

The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%).
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The table provides information about the proportion of
water
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 being used for four territories in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada.
Overall
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, the amount of
water
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 being used for
agriculture
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 in Egypt is the highest,
while
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 the figure for
industry
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 can be seen in Canada.
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, the share of
water
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 being used for domestic is lowest in almost all countries, except Canada. 82% of
water
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 in Egypt was allocated for
agriculture
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, followed by
industry
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 and domestic at 10% and 8% respectively.
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, the share of
water
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 being used in
agriculture
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 in Saudi Arabia far exceeds that of
industry
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 and domestic, with respective figures being 64%, 30% and 6% in that order.
Conversely
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, New Zealand used
water
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 in
industry
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 the most, at 46%, compared to 44% in
agriculture
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 and 10% in domestic. The percentage of
water
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 being used for
industry
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 is the highest, followed by domestic (20%) and
agriculture
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 (10%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, agriculture, industry with synonyms.
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