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The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%).

The table below shows water use for different purposes in four countries. The use of water by four different countries (%).
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The table provides information about the proportion of
water
 being used for four territories in Egypt, Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada.
Overall
, the amount of
water
 being used for
agriculture
 in Egypt is the highest,
while
 the figure for
industry
 can be seen in Canada.
In addition
, the share of
water
 being used for domestic is lowest in almost all countries, except Canada. 82% of
water
 in Egypt was allocated for
agriculture
, followed by
industry
 and domestic at 10% and 8% respectively.
Similarly
, the share of
water
 being used in
agriculture
 in Saudi Arabia far exceeds that of
industry
 and domestic, with respective figures being 64%, 30% and 6% in that order.
Conversely
, New Zealand used
water
 in
industry
 the most, at 46%, compared to 44% in
agriculture
 and 10% in domestic. The percentage of
water
 being used for
industry
 is the highest, followed by domestic (20%) and
agriculture
 (10%).
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