The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph indicates the
visition
a Caribbean Correct your spelling
visit to
island
in terms of the figures Use synonyms
of
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for
touristh
during the 8- year period.
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tourists
tourist
Overall
, the total Linking Words
vistors
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visitors
in
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to
Caribbean
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the Caribbean
island
increased, no matter Use synonyms
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whether touristed
touristed
in the way of staying on Correct your spelling
tourists
cruise
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ships
or staying on Use synonyms
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island
, these figures of tourists all rose between 2010 and 2017.
The amounts of tourists of Add an article
the island
total
in Add an article
the total
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the Carbbean
Carbbean
was Correct your spelling
Caribbean
at
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apply
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millions
in the year 2017. In the same year, the Change to singular
million
numbers
of Use synonyms
vistors
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visitors
of
staying on Change preposition
apply
cruise
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ships
and on Use synonyms
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island
were Add an article
the island
at
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apply
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millions
and Change to singular
million
at
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apply
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millions
respectively.
During the 8-year period, the total Change to singular
million
numbers
of Caribbean Use synonyms
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island
experienced a Fix the agreement mistake
islands
dramatical
growth, especially between 2016 and 2017. Replace the word
dramatic
However
, the Linking Words
numbers
of staying on Use synonyms
cruise
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ships
and on Use synonyms
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island
fluctuated in the starting years - 2010 to 2013. But some changes happened between 2015 and 2016, people switched the way of visiting. Fix the agreement mistake
islands
After
Linking Words
this
change, the figures Linking Words
of
staying on Change preposition
for
cruise
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ships
increased to 2 million in 2017. Use synonyms
In contrast
, Linking Words
less
tourists stayed on Change the quantifier
fewer
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island
, so the Add an article
the island
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numbers
of staying on Fix the agreement mistake
number
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island
declined in 2016 and Add an article
the island
then
remained the Linking Words
numbers
of visitors at 1.5 Use synonyms
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millions
in 2017.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, ships, millions, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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