Task 1: The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.

Task 1: The chart below shows information about students studying six main subjects at a US university in 2010.
The chart below illustrates a database about the total number of people participating in six main subjects at an American college in 2010.
Overall
, there was a difference between the choices of both genders when registering subjects, except
Finance
and Engineering.
Finance
, Accounting, and Mathematics were one of the most favourable subjects.
While
the number of women studying Accounting was 200, 30 more than the other sex, 200 males majored in Mathematics, which was 4 times more than the opposite. Strikingly, by attracting 225 learners of each type,
Finance
became the most popular course in the university.
On the other hand
, the total
students
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pursuing Economics, Marketing, and Engineering was about 535, which was half of the favourable ones.
Whereas
with 70, the total of female students majoring in Economics was half of men, the opposite rate was seen in Marketing with 120 girls, which was 50 more than boys.
Additionally
, Engineering was the least popular subject with only 100 in total which was less than one-fourth compared with 450
the
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total students specializing in
Finance
. The women in the course at 48 people
was
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approximately equal to the men
with
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at
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52.
This
subject attracted
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