The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004.

The table below shows the percentage of employers in various sectors having difficulty in finding staff in 2003 and 2004.
The bar chart shows how many employers in the 4
sectors
(Manufacturing, Building,
Commerce
, and Services), recruited the staff with 3 different difficulties between 2003 and 2004.
Overall
, There was a growth in difficulties in finding skilled
workers
and unskilled
workers
from 2003 and 2004 in all
sectors
, except the
commerce
sector. Recruiting technical and managerial
workers
was figured with an easy task for over a year. Nearly half of
workers
with skills were hard to recruit.
This
percentage increased considerably by around 5 % in the manufacturing, building, and services
sectors
and It decreased in the
commerce
sector from 47 % to 41 %.
Likewise
, unskilled
workers
also
had the same trend with a surge of 5 % in all
sectors
, with an exception in the
commerce
sector dropping to 19 %. Finding
workers
with competency in technical and managerial was the easiest task among other categories. The
overall
percentage was below 15 % in 2003, and
this
number had a gradual decline below 10 % in all parts in 2004.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, commerce, workers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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