The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart
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the scores of three teams for four different seasons .Let us summarise the given chart below.
Points
taken by three
team
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teams
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such
as A,
B
and
C
are shown in the chart. In
this
the
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team
B
has won all the seasons against
other
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the other
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two
team
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teams
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A and
C
. In the
year
2002,
the
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team
A has taken
less
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fewer points
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point
among
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other teams.
Team
B
has taken 82
points
in the same
year
.
Team
C
has taken
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15
points
in the
year
2003,
this
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which
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is more compared to
team
A.
Team
A and
teamC
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team
team C
teams
has
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approximately equal
points
in the
year
2003 [
11point
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11 points
and 15
point
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points
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].
Team
A has taken 35
points
in the
year
2004 and
team
C
had taken 12
point
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,
this
was the lowest
point
taken by a
team
in the
year
2004. In 2005,
team
B
has taken
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the highest among all teams [55point] and the other two
team
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teams
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has
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had
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below 10
points
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words points, team, b, c, year, point with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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