The line chart shows trends in terms of employment in the USA in millions and predictions for the future
The line graph illustrates the trends of jobs that people are working in
USA
from 1975 to 2025.
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, it is apparent that there is a significant change for
the Change preposition
in
services
and the agricultural workers in the given periods. Whereas
, manufacturing job
had some fluctuation.
In detail, in 1975 the manufacturing employment was nearly 10 Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
millions
. Change to singular
million
Then
it reached its peak in 1980 around
40 Change preposition
at around
millions
. After that it decline and in 2025, it will reach again in 10 Change to singular
million
millions
same as when the period starts. Change to singular
million
Similarly
, services
was
Change the verb form
were
same
number as manufacturing from 1975 to 1980. Later Change the article
the same
this
trend increased while
manufacture
jobs declined. It is visible from the chart that Replace the word
manufacturing
services
employment will be about 90 millions
in 2025.
Compared to the Change to singular
million
services
and the manufacture, the agriculture employment was highest in the begging
of the time given and had no changes until 1977. Correct your spelling
beginning
Further
Add a comma
Further,
this
trend went down gradually up to 20 millions
in 1985. Change to singular
million
According to
the graph, agriculture jobs will reduce again in 2025.Submitted by rinuthomasmathew07 on
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