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The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia.

The chart shows the percentage of car manufacturer's total sales in North America, South America, Europe and Asia.
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The bar chart describes the proportion of
car
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cars
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 sold by
car
 producers in South
America
, North
America
, Asia,
Europe
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and Europe
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 between 2006 and 2010 As can be clearly seen from the graph, the four regions
expertenced
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experienced
experience
different
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differently
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.
While
 the quantity of
the
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apply
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cars
 sold in
Asian
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Asia
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 and Europe was higher than
the
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in the
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 other two regions. As the graph shows, the number of
cars
 sold rocketed slightly from 25% to 34% between 2006 and 2007 in Europe.
This
 figure was kept the same until 2008. In
term
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terms
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 of the number of
car
sales
,
this
 proportion hit a peak in 2010 of approximately 50%.
By contrast
, the percentage of
cars
 sold in Asia
keep
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remained
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 unchanged
35
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at 35
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% between 2006 and 2007. In 2008, the
cars
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number of cars
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 sold went down slightly
accounted
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accounting
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 for about 38% of total
car
sales
. During the period from 2008 to 2010, there was a quick drop in
cars
 sold from 38% to 30%.
However
, accounts for 29% of the total sold of
cars
 in North
America
,
while
 the proportions were lower for
cars
 in South
America
 at 11% in 2006. During a period of 1
years
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year
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,
cars
 sold in North
America
also
 spent a high percentage of
car
manufacturer’s
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manufacturers
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, at 23% compared with 5% for
car
sales
 in South
America
. Regarding
car
sales
 in South
America
 , for 2008 and 2010
are
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were
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 a slow rise only 6% and 11% respectively,
while
cars
 sold in North
America
 witnessed
an
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a
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 significant decline from around 22% to 9%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, america, cars, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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