The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The two tables
illustrates
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data
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas within five years (1999-2004) in Switzerland,
Denmark
,
UK
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the UK
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
.
Overall
, it can be seen that
coffe
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coffee
sales
showed an
improved
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sales
from 1999 to 2004 with the highest
sales
was the
UK
.
Similarly
in bananas
sales
, three of the countries (Switzerland,
UK
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the UK
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, and Belgium) increased,
while
Sweden
and
Denmark
showed
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a dicreased
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dicreased
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decrease
.
At
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the first table, the
UK
has achieved the highest
sales
among the other countries in coffee, from 1.5
million
euros
to 20
million
euros
in these five years,
while
Sweden
and
Denmark
had the lowest coffee
sales
with only 0.2
million
euros
from 1999 to 2004.
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the second table, Switzerland showed an increase in banana
sales
with 47
million
euros
in 2004 from 15
million
euros
in 1999.
Similarly
, the
UK
and Belgium
also
experienced growth in their
sales
.
In contrast
,
sales
in
Denmark
and
Sweden
decreased by around 1
million
euros
over the period, with 1,8 and 2
million
euros
, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, denmark, uk, sweden, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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