The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas within five years (1999-2004) in Switzerland, Use synonyms
Denmark
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Sweden
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UK
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the UK
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sales
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euros
from 1999 to 2004.
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euros
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euros
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