The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The two tables

illustrates

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data

sales

of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas within five years (1999-2004) in Switzerland,

Denmark

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the UK

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, Belgium, and

Sweden

Overall

, it can be seen that

coffe

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coffee

sales

showed an

improved

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sales

from 1999 to 2004 with the highest

sales

was the

Similarly

in bananas

sales

, three of the countries (Switzerland,

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the UK

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, and Belgium) increased,

while

Sweden

and

Denmark

showed

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a dicreased

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dicreased

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decrease

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the first table, the

has achieved the highest

sales

among the other countries in coffee, from 1.5

million

euros

to 20

million

euros

in these five years,

while

Sweden

and

Denmark

had the lowest coffee

sales

with only 0.2

million

euros

from 1999 to 2004.

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the second table, Switzerland showed an increase in banana

sales

with 47

million

euros

in 2004 from 15

million

euros

in 1999.

Similarly

, the

and Belgium

also

experienced growth in their

sales

In contrast

sales

Denmark

and

Sweden

decreased by around 1

million

euros

over the period, with 1,8 and 2

million

euros

, respectively.

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market expansion
sustainable consumption
ethical products
consumer awareness
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percentage increase
market share
profit margins
trade initiatives
consumer behavior
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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

Many claim that tha fast food industry has a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professional, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in any country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

You had borrowed a book from the public library however, when You reached home, you found that some important pages were torn away. Write a letter to the librarian explaining the situation. You should - Mention the book - Mention the pages - Suggest what can be done.