The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The two tables
illustrates
data Change the verb form
illustrate
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas within five years (1999-2004) in Switzerland, Denmark
, UK
, Belgium, and Correct article usage
the UK
Sweden
. Overall
, it can be seen that coffe
Correct your spelling
coffee
sales
showed an improved
Replace the word
improvement
sales
from 1999 to 2004 with the highest sales
was the UK
. Similarly
in bananas sales
, three of the countries (Switzerland, UK
, and Belgium) increased, Correct article usage
the UK
while
Sweden
and Denmark
showed Correct article usage
a dicreased
dicreased
.
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decrease
At
the first table, the Change preposition
In
UK
has achieved the highest sales
among the other countries in coffee, from 1.5 million
euros
to 20 million
euros
in these five years, while
Sweden
and Denmark
had the lowest coffee sales
with only 0.2 million
euros
from 1999 to 2004.
At
the second table, Switzerland showed an increase in banana Change preposition
In
sales
with 47 million
euros
in 2004 from 15 million
euros
in 1999. Similarly
, the UK
and Belgium also
experienced growth in their sales
. In contrast
, sales
in Denmark
and Sweden
decreased by around 1 million
euros
over the period, with 1,8 and 2 million
euros
, respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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