the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing

the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing
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The pie charts and table provided show the sources of fish brought into the US between the years 1988 and 2000.
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, during the time the major contributor, which is China, has seen a reduction in the market share, the sum total has been on a steady rise during the years.
This
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is the result of the drastic increase in the imported resources from mostly
Canada
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. At the year 1988, the
overall
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finance in the market amounted to around 6.57 billion dollars. With China having more than 60% of it.
This
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meant that
Canada
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and other countries had almost 40%, more than two-thirds of which was for just
Canada
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. In the next four years,
Canada
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had a dramatic upward movement arriving at about half of the business.
On the contrary
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, Chana lost most of its share resulting in only 35% of the now 8.52 billion dollar industry. Until 2000, the same trend continued steadily leaving China with less than 30%.
However
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, the balance shifted towards more of an even distribution giving almost an equal 40% to both
Canada
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and the rest of the world.
While
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Canada
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had been losing a bit of the totality it held previously, it was still holding onto 42% of the enormous 10.72 billion dollars being shipped out of the US.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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