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The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the uk in 2002.

The table below shows expenditures of four car companies on advertising in the uk in 2002.
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The given table compares the spending on several types of
media
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 advertising from four car
companies
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 in the United Kingdom in 2002.
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, in all types of advertising,
companies
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 spent the highest number of their budget on TV,
while
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 the lowest spending could be seen in the cinema in all four manufactures. All
companies
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 had allocated their funds in the same number in the broadcast. It is worth noticing that the total money spent by four vehicle manufacturers on TV was the highest compared to other
media
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. Cetirizine was the one that spent the highest
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 TV, followed by Vauxhall, Renault, and Rover with 70, 65, 59, and 45, respectively. In terms of printing
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, Renault spent the most at 45. The expenditure of Rover was
also
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 high (38), compared to Vauxhall which accounted for 8, as the least.
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, the lowest spending was on Cinema with no more than 6, and two
companies
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, Rover and Cetirizine, did not use
this
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media
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 for their promotion. For outdoors, Renault and Vauxhall spent a similar budget (7)
whereas
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 the other
companies
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 had budgets of no more than 3
millions
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. Meanwhile, it is apparent that all
companies
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 allocated the same budget to Radio with 15.

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