You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart presents the
propotion
of the Correct your spelling
proportion
population
in different Asian countries, namely Philippines
, Correct article usage
the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand and Indonesia
. The figures show changes in the percentage of total people from 1970 to 2020, with overview
up to 2040 year. Correct article usage
an overview
Overall
, the main trend for all counties remains steadly
, the percentages of Correct your spelling
steady
steadily
whole
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the whole
population
is
rising through the years. Comparing countries, there are Change the verb form
are
two
of them show a
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apply
sharply grow
, Replace the word
sharp growth
otherwise
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
two
demostrate
a Correct your spelling
demonstrate
steadily
change.
The percentage of Change the adverb
steady
total
Add an article
the total
population
experienced
growth for all countries, reached a peak in 2040 year. Correct pronoun usage
that experienced
Number
of people Change the article
The number
of
Change preposition
in
total
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the total
population
in Malaysia
and Indonesia
increased dramatically from 2000 to 2040 years. The percentages achieve
about 65 and 80 in Verb problem
are
Indonesia
and Malaysia
, respectively. On the other hand
, as the growth of the population
in Thailand and Philippines
went up, the total number of people Correct article usage
the Philippines
were
lower than in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Malaysia
and Indonesia
.
To summarise, there are two
main trends on the graph: a consistent upward trend in population
grow
, and a steady growth with Replace the word
growth
Correct article usage
a sharply
sharply
increase of another Change the adverb
sharp
two
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, malaysia, indonesia, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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