The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line graph displays the data about the consumption of
fuel
and the prediction of that in the USA from 1980 to 2030. In general, petrol and oil contribute the most ratio of energy consumption and it may reach about 50 quadrillion units
by 2030.
Similarly
, coal, which is the second fuel
waste in energy use, also
exhibited a steady increase since 1980 and is projected will see 30 quadrillion units
in 2030. In comparison, consuming natural gas units
shows a frequent fluctuation between 1980 and 2015, whereas
it slightly decreased in 1985 and 2010 respectively. And it is predicted dramatically stable until 2030.
However
, other kinds of fuel
such
as Nuclear, Solar or
Wind and Hydropower Correct word choice
apply
are consumed
only 5 quadrillion Change the verb form
have consumed
units
and they may not experience a significant increase in the coming 15 years.
In summary, petrol and oil, coal and natural gas will continuously be the main fuel
in energy consumption.Submitted by odongua on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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