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the graph below shows the populations in india and china since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth untill 2050

the graph below shows the populations in india and china since the year of 2000and predicts populations growth untill 2050
#populations #india #china #year #growth #untill
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The graph provides information about the
number of
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population’s
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population
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 growth in
India
 and
China
 in 2000 and the projection until 2050.
Overall
, the number of populations in
India
was
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increased exponentially from 2000 to 2050.
Conversely
,
China
’s population
was
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 increased moderately and is projected to decrease gradually in 2050. In more detail, the number of people in
India
was
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has
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 increased gradually from 1
billion
 in 2000 to 1,35
billion
 in 2020, and it is projected to reach 1,6
billion
 in 2050.
India
 will surpass
China
 in 2040 with
total
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populations
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population
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1,5
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of 1,5
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billion
.
India
 is projected to reach its peak of 1,6
billion
 in 2050. Meanwhile,
in
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from
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 2000 to 2020,
China
’s residents went up exponentially from 1,25
billion
 to 1,41
billion
 and increased slightly to 1,42
billion
 in 2030. The growth of people in
China
 will decrease gradually until 2050. Population growth in
China
 is predicted
fell
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 gradually from 1,42
billion
 in 2030 to 1,39
billion
 in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.
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