The chart below show the percentage of sending on different areas in the average household in one country in 1910 and 1960

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percentage

of expenditures on 6 different aspects in 1910 and 1960 .

Overall

, The

percentage

of

money

spent on various

such

as housing and entertainment rose

while

those

of

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Food and clothing

become

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less favourable. Another noteworthy fact is that

,

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the overage

money

people spent on healthcare didn't change. It can be seen that, in 1910, 43

percent

of household expenditure was spent on food but in 1960,

this

percentage

decreased by 13

percent

.

Also

,

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situation is repeated in clothes. In 1910, 14

percent

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of

money

allocated

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clothes

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but

this

percentage

decreased

2

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percent

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by 1960. At the same time, 23

percent

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of

money

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the money

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was spent on housing.

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in 1960,

this

percent

was changed to 28. When it comes to others, the

percentage

rose.In 1910, the other was 13

percent

.

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this

indicator increased to 8

percent

in 1960 As for entertainment, it was 2

percent

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in 1910 and that

percentage

was

lowest

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. After 50 years,

this

percentage

has increased only 2%.In 1910 and 1960, healthcare accounted for 5

percent

.