The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the percentage of calls made by telephones in the UK over the 8-year period. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that almost all data experienced an
up-ward
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trend,
while
the reverse pattern was true for
local-fixed
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line. A dramatic increase in the proportions of mobiles
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seen over the period of eight years. In terms of the local-fixed lines’ data, it started at over 70
billion
minutes in 1995, followingly , it elevated dramatically and topped at 90 after half a decade.
Subsequently
, there was a
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leveling-off
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witnessed in the telephones to the homogenous points in the first year. With regard to the national-international fixed line and
mobiles’
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information, there was a minimally uniform trend underwent in the others, except for the initial point and the growth level.
Whereas
the national-international fixed line increased consistently from approximately 40
billion
mintutes
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minutes
to merely 60
billion
mintutes
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minutes
, the mobiles rose relentlessly from merely 5
billion
mintutes
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minutes
to just 45
billion
minitutes
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minutes
. In 2002, the figure for mobile was
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times as much as itself in the previous eight years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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