the graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. summarize the informaion and make a comparison. write at least 150 words.
The given line graph provides information from a report in 2008 about the energy
consumption
in the USA by the projections since
1980 to 2030. Unit Change preposition
from
are
measured in Change the verb form
is
Quadrillion
.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the three
energy sources
with the higher level
of consumption
at the start increased whereas
the other three
sources
which started at the same level
shows different trend throughout the given period. Moreover
, while
the consumption
of Nuclear and Solar increased gradually, the
hydropower shows Correct article usage
apply
declining
trend.
In Add an article
a declining
the
terms of the Correct article usage
apply
three
higher sources
of consumption
start with the different level
with petrol oil as the highest among them which started Fix the agreement mistake
levels
with
35 Change preposition
at
quadrillion
units
and reach
Wrong verb form
reached
the
peak as the end in approximately 50 Correct article usage
a
quadrillion
units
. The other two higher sources
began with 15 and 20 quadrillion
units
respectively and ends
with Wrong verb form
ended
close
gap Add an article
a close
around
25 and 30 Change preposition
of around
quadrillion
units
.
Regarding the other three
energy consumption
that started at the same level
is showing steadly
movement which 2 of them Correct your spelling
steadily
steady
such
Correct quantifier usage
apply
as
Nuclear and solar ends with approximately 6 Change preposition
apply
quadrillion
units
and the
hydropower reach the end with under 5 Correct article usage
apply
quadrillion
units
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