The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table below provides information concerning the changes in people who went on international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. The data can be divided into 2 groups, namely the
number
that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in million
.
Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the total number
of people who travel abroad slightly increases over the following period.
To begin
with the changes of traveller
from Africa, Asia and the Pacific, Europe, and the Middle East, The rate in Africa rose from 18.2 in 1990 to 20.8 in 1995, 26.9 in 2000, and 28.7 in 2005. There was an increment rate in Asia and the Pacific grew from 60.2 in 1990 to 80.3 in 1995, 117.4 in 2000, and 135.8 in 2005. In Europe, the quantities soared around 20 from 280.2 in 1990 to 400.2 in 2005. Fix the agreement mistake
travellers
While
the lowest portion of this
table is the travelling persons in the Middle East, the number
of people grew approximately 6 from 9.8 in 1990 to 15.8 in 2005.
Moving on to the international travel rate in America, there was a dramatic increase from 80.5 in 1990 to 118.2 in 2000 before the number
gradually dropped to 113.2 in 2005.Submitted by nine318 on
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