The chart show requests for information at a tourist office in the United kingdom from january to june
The graph illustrates information requested at a tourist office in the United Kingdom between January and June.
Overall
, it can be seen that requests
by letter/email slightly decrease
. Wrong verb form
decreased
Meanwhile
the other way increases the request.
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Requests
in person and by phone steadily increased. In person
Add a hyphen
In-person
requests
got nearly 400 in January, lower than the two others. But the requests
peaked at approximately 2000 which was the highest in June. Phone requests
followed the
similar pattern, starting at just under 1000 unlike Correct article usage
a
in person
Add a hyphen
in-person
requests
it
fell exactly Correct pronoun usage
which
at
800 Change preposition
to
then
rose significantly right at 1600.
Correct word choice
and then
However
, the requests
by letter or email experienced the opposite of them, that
means declined. In January the request stood at almost 800 and continuously dropped until May. It finished at slightly less than 400 in June that had remained with a month before.Correct pronoun usage
which
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