The oie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy consumption of the UK in two years
The pie charts give information on different types of energy
consumption
of
the UK between 1995 and 2005.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, the highest consumption
percentage Add a missing verb
is hold
hold
by gas in both Wrong verb form
held
year
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years
while
the lowest percentages
in both Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
condition
is Change to a plural noun
conditions
other
category.
Regarding the given data, in 1995, the highest energy Change the wording
another
consumption
was gas at 29.63%. The coal production was second from the top at 29.80%, it
was slightly higher compared to Correct pronoun usage
which
petro
by 0.63%. The usage of nuclear was low at 6.40% Change the capitalization
Petro
while
the lowest percentage on
that year was Change preposition
in
other
Change preposition
in other
category
with 4.90%.
In Fix the agreement mistake
categories
comparisons
, the amount of energy Fix the agreement mistake
comparison
consumption
in 2005 was slighly
higher than a decade before by Correct your spelling
slightly
0.68
% gap. The rate of Correct article usage
a 0.68
cole
Capitalize word
Cole
also
had an increase from 29.63% in 1995 to 30.31% in 2005. In contrast
, the percentage of Petro had a drop
by roughly 10% Wrong verb form
dropped
while
the consumption
on
nuclear and other Change preposition
of
category
rose, both Fix the agreement mistake
categories
reached
around 10%.Wrong verb form
reaching
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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