More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV progams to get news. They get news about the world through the internet. Is this positive or negative development?

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programs to get
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online to get
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all over the world.
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positive development.
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spread through the internet. There are several things that, why it will be
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development. On the one hand,
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news
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time-consuming method for every person.
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people
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with their
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online platforms to get
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. Every person can google it or
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reliable websites to get information. For
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around the world
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money to get newspapers. When some
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lazy to read something on hardcopy they can
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TV
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is the most reliable source to get
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news
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. We can not trust anymore and
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vast
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through
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online
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media.
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videos viral through the internet and most
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other countries trust
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truth whenever
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newspaper
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programs are the paramount importance to
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. In conclusion, digital
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newspapers
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the best option to get
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instead
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news papers
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are the positive development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital journalism
  • News aggregator
  • Social media platforms
  • Fake news
  • Media literacy
  • Traditional media outlets
  • Broadband penetration
  • Echo chambers
  • Fact-checking
  • Citizen journalism
  • Media convergence
  • Paywalls
  • Media bias
  • Online readership
  • Sensationalism
  • Viral news
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