The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing houswork in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs
portrays
the percentage in household of electrical Change the verb form
portray
appliances ownerships
and its relationship to household chores i.e laundry, meal preparation and cleaning from the Fix the agreement mistake
appliance ownership
year
1920 to – 2019 in a specific country.
Generally, the number of families acquiring electrical appliances
increases
over the Wrong verb form
increased
years
, with two products, namely the washing machine and vacuum cleaner, reaching 100% ownership in 1980 and 2000. Although
not as fast as the others, the purchase of washing machine also
showed a positive trend and sales rose by approximately 30% in the 99
Correct your spelling
99-year
years
period. In contrary to the increasing popularity of electrical appliances
, the amount of time invested for housework seemed to be decreasing. This
meant that an inverse relationship existed between the
electrical device ownership and time dedicated Correct article usage
apply
for
weekly household chores.
The popularity of refrigerators started at the lowest point (0%) and rose constantly, up to 2 folds Change preposition
to
in
every 20 Change preposition
apply
years
, before plateauing in the year
1980 and before reaching 100% until
the end of the period in the Change preposition
by
year
1980. The same phenomenon could also
be observed in the purchase of vacuum cleaners, whereby their sales increased by 20 % every 2 decades before reaching 100% in the year
2000. On the other hand
/however
, the purchase of washing machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
on the other hand
, increased slowly?
at a slower pace, and experienced a slight drop in demand in the Change the punctuation
.
year
1980 before finally
covering 70% of families in the year
2019.
As the number of purchases of electrical appliances
increased, a fivefold decrease in the amount of time required to complete housework could be observed within the 90
Correct your spelling
90-year
years
period. This
observation could indicate an increased efficiency provided by electrical appliances
in modern households.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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