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write a letter to restaurant that you had dinner last night

#restaurant #dinner #night
Dear Sir, I hope you are well. I am writing
this
 letter to share my feedback about the dinner I had
last
 night at your amazing restaurant. First and foremost, I am very amazed
with
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 the
ambiance
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ambience
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 of your restaurant which gives
soothing
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 and calming vibe to people. Maintainance of
hygience
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hygiene
 and cleanliness was
upto
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up to
 the mark.
Chairs
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 were super comfortable and relaxing that for one moment I thought I should sleep in
this
cozy
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enivronment
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environment
. The behaviour of your staff and manager was very impressive. Their communication skills were beyond my expectations and I had a lovely experience talking to them. If I come to the
the
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most important point, which is taste,
then
 I will not be wrong If I say that the taste of every dish was worth the money. Especially the dishes we order in
chinese
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food
. The perfect balance of sweet and spicy
in
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chicken gravy melted my heart. I've never eaten
such
 delicious
chinese
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food
 before in my life. ' Now let's come to the
last
 but not the least dish. Which was molten lava
cake
 with an
icecram
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icecream
ice cream
 topping on it. I loved the way chocolate was flowing out of the
cake
 and
icecream
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 was covering the bitterness of chocolate with its full flavour of sweetness. But In my opinion,
cake
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 was a bit hard. I was expecting
very
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 soft texture of
cake
 but
overall
 taste was good. I will 9/10
to
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 your
chinese
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food
 and 8/10
to
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 your sweet dish. But the ambiance and comfort
was
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upto
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up to
 the mark. The architecture was taking everyone's attention and
perfect
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was perfect
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to take
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 aesthetic pictures. My family took lots of pictures to add
in
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 their memory book. I think
this
 is the best place for all types of generations. Children can have their best time in
restaurant's
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 play area, youngsters can enjoy having the best
food
along with
 taking aesthetic pictures for their social media and elder people like us can relax
ourselves
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in
such
 a relaxing environment with delicious
food
. I will sum up my letter by thanking you
to open
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such
 an amazing
food
 point in our city to make our weekends better. Yours sincerely, Zainab
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear, central idea, avoiding mixing multiple points in one paragraph.
greeting and closing
Employ a more consistent and formal structure in greetings and closings for a semi-formal or formal tone.
logical structure
Introduce the letter appropriately with a clear statement of purpose and conclude with a formal closing to signal the end of the correspondence effectively.
complete response
The task requires a letter format with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, touching upon all relevant points of the prompt.
suitable writing tone
Maintain a tone that is consistently appropriate for the semi-formal nature of a letter to a restaurant, balancing between personal opinion and formal feedback.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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