In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes?** What measures should be taken to combat this issue?**

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drugs

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improving

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athletes

’ physical capability increased significant discussion. Despite intake

those

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drugs

would temporarily

increased

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athletes

’ personal

record

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, several negative influences would

followed

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by

this

behaviour, including health

risk

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and

unfair

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competition environment.

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essay

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firstly

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discuss the sequence of

this

behaviour and give

one

proper solution.

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the negative impacts

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performance-improving

drugs

is more serious than the positive

one

.

Firstly

, it is hard to deny that, certain

drugs

may give extra advantages for

athletes

, including stimulating

nerve

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system and promoting recovery.

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, science

also

suggest

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that if those

drugs

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improperly, it would

rise

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some health issues,

for

example

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heart attack.

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, it is imaginable that some

athletes

would

received

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better

resource

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, including

sport

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drugs

,

while

others may

training

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under a poor material situation.

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mean

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that would create some

unfair

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between different

athletes

.

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, to prevent those

negatively

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consequences,

one

practical solution would be

provide

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medical education to

athletes

. Even though a well-established body check program would prevent the drug

using

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rate, some

athletes

would risk their

career

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for

a

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better

result

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results

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by using certain

drugs

. Based on

this

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phenomenons

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,

one

better solution would be setting up

a

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education program, which would provide proper knowledge about the side

effect

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effects

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of the performance-improving

drugs

for the

athletes

. Only when

athletes

having

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those

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background information, they

could

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weight

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the advantages and disadvantages by themselves and the problem of unjustified drug

using

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would

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be solved effectively. In conclusion, the consequences of performance-enhancing

drugs

would result in

athletes

’ risky health

situation

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situations

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and

unfair

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competition environment. To address

this

problem, medical education would be a practical

solutions

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.