The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

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The diagram gives detailed information about the

process

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by which books are produced.

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, the

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involves both manual and technical stages, comprising two main steps: the preparation of the book sheets and the publication .

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,it is

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worth mentioning that the printing

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takes about 18 -24 months . The initial step of the book production commences with the writing of each sheet .The sheets are

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posted to publishing houses ,where they are reviewed by editors whether there are some errors .Having been confirmed , a contract is signed with the publishing house .The design is worked on in the following

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before being decided on

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the final

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layout. The remaining stages are continued

to begin

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to issue the book using a printing machine .Once they are published completely , the individual sheets are brought together to be covered ,

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, thick books are formed.

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, they are ready to be distributed to bookstores.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?

Some parents want their children to read educational books instead of entertainment books because those are the waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statements

You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: - where you went - what you saw there - how you felt about it

You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: - where you went  - what you saw there  - how you felt about it