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The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.

The diagram below shows the various stages involved in publishing a book.
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The diagram gives detailed information about the
process
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 by which books are produced.
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, the
process
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 involves both manual and technical stages, comprising two main steps: the preparation of the book sheets and the publication .
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,it is
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 worth mentioning that the printing
process
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 takes about 18 -24 months . The initial step of the book production commences with the writing of each sheet .The sheets are
then
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 posted to publishing houses ,where they are reviewed by editors whether there are some errors .Having been confirmed , a contract is signed with the publishing house .The design is worked on in the following
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 before being decided on
final
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the final
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 layout. The remaining stages are continued
to begin
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 to issue the book using a printing machine .Once they are published completely , the individual sheets are brought together to be covered ,
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 , thick books are formed.
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, they are ready to be distributed to bookstores.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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