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a significant
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adults to become unhealthy .Today , many Rephrase
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people
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foods
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essay will look at the main causes of the Linking Words
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and propose some solutions.
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people
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food
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of
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people
are getting tired Use synonyms
to spend
time Change preposition
of spending
to cook
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this
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foods
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food
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, there is another reason , which is Linking Words
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they
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government
should increase Add an article
the government
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on electricity to prevent Correct article usage
the tax
and
obesity which is caused Correct word choice
apply
to
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by
people
who are not easily aroused to activity.
Another cause of obesity is that most both children and adults do not get enough physical exercise .One of the biggest Use synonyms
reason
for Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
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that is
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go
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than
people
might not afford it The solution is Use synonyms
government
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the government
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decrease the tax Correct your spelling
should
of
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people
should not rely on the gym , Use synonyms
instead
they should try to prepare themselves at home.
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instead
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complain
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