All over the world , societies are facing a growing problem with obesity.This problem affects both children and adults.What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled ?

Over the

last

few years , it has become

significant

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problem

for children and

also

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adults to become unhealthy .Today , many

people

often consider eating fast

foods

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food

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as an unimportant thing , and they want to eat more and more fast

food

instead

of homemade

food

.In my country , the

problem

is becoming worse and worse , and it is important to take steps to prevent eating unhealthy foods.

This

essay will look at the main causes of the

problem

and propose some solutions. One of the reasons so many

people

are obese is that they eat junk

food

, like hamburgers, chips or fried chicken It might be the reason

of

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people

are getting tired

to spend

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of spending

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time

to cook

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cooking

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food

at home.The solution is for the government to increase tax on

this

kind of fast

foods

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food

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.

Besides

, there is another reason , which is

tey

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they

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tend to become indolent.As technology advances ,

people

's jobs set off easier and they look good on coach potatoes more and more .To ameliorate

this

problem

,

government

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the government

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should increase

tax

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on electricity to prevent

and

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obesity which is caused

to

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by

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people

who are not easily aroused to activity. Another cause of obesity is that most both children and adults do not get enough physical exercise .One of the biggest

reason

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for

this

is

that is

more high-cost to do sport or

going

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to a gym

that

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it used to be.In many countries , the monthly fees for using a gym are more than £50 which means many

people

might not afford it The solution is

government

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the government

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shoukd

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should

decrease the tax

of

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on

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using gyms and

together with

this

,

people

should not rely on the gym ,

instead

they should try to prepare themselves at home.

To sum up

,

instead

of

complain

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about comfortabilities of gyms , children and adults can easily even walk every single day to prevent and reduce overweighting .