The table below gives information about the different ways mobile phone owners use their phones in a developing country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the percentages of different cell
phone
features that mobile Use synonyms
phone
owners use in a developing country from 2006 to 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, there was around the same ratio of users using their Linking Words
phones
for making calls, taking photos, and sending and receiving text messages, Use synonyms
while
there were dramatic increases in Linking Words
phone
users playing games, searching the internet, playing music and recording videos.
Throughout the time period, almost all Use synonyms
phone
owners made calls on their Use synonyms
phones
, making it the most used feature over the Use synonyms
years
. There were small increases in the percentage of users taking photos from around two-thirds in the beginning to 76% Use synonyms
at the end
. The ratio of Linking Words
people
sending and receiving text messages through Use synonyms
phones
Use synonyms
also
rose a little from 73% to 79% in four Linking Words
years
.
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On the other hand
, percentages of other features skyrocketed over the Linking Words
years
. The percentage of Use synonyms
people
playing games on their Use synonyms
phone
starts from 17% and had a three-fold increase over four Use synonyms
years
. The ratio of Use synonyms
people
playing music Use synonyms
also
doubled from the beginning, resulting in 26% Linking Words
at the end
. Only one-tenth of Linking Words
people
recorded videos on their Use synonyms
phones
in 2008, but the numbers had nearly a four-fold increase after two Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, there are 41% of Linking Words
phone
owners used their Use synonyms
phones
for searching the Internet in 2008, and it increased to 73% Use synonyms
at the end
Linking Words
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