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The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opedend, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
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The table chart provides information about the subway system in six main cities with road length in
kilometres
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, date opened and the number of passengers yearly. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that London's road was the oldest opened and the longest among all seven routes,
while
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 Tokyo stands out for serving by far the most passengers number.
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, London's railway, which opened in 1863, is nearly two times more expansive(394
kilometres
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) than that in Paris(1900, 199
kilometres
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), Tokyo (1927, 155
kilometres
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) and Washington DC(1976, 126
kilometres
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).
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, the newly built tiny roads, which are located in Kyoto and Los Angeles, had a length of 11
kilometres
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 and 28
kilometres
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, respectively.
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, the stations that were very popular among the cities, the Tokyo city's data made up the use of 1,928,000,000 passengers annually. The route that stands in second place by passenger serving data is Paris City Way serves 1191 million people per year. Third place, deservedly goes to the oldest of the mentioned roads, The London railway, with a number of users by 775 people. The
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 three railways are not as popular as their latter three rivals.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilometres with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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