Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do vou agree or disagree?

Helping other
countries
can help the whole world if we know how to help them. Many may say, and I do not agree, that the only thing that can help other
countries
get out of their own misery is
money
. Some others believe it is not enough, and poor
countries
must get other types of help. It is argued by some people that helping weak
countries
by giving them
money
can help them in many ways.
That is
, they can allocate the given budget to fix their weaknesses in financial, tourism
accomadation
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accommodation
and so much more.
For example
, by improving the historical buildings and fixing old churches, not only will a huge number of tourists attract to
such
a
country
, but
also
this
can help the
financial
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of that
country
develope
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develop
developed
as all tourists have to pay where ever they desire to
VIsIt
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visit
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.
However
, spending
money
needs plans and
speacial
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special
structures which many
of
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apply
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poor
countries
do not pay attention to. only when a poor
country
change
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changes
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their strategy in spending
money
, will
they
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it
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become a developed one
.
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For example
, should you give one thousand
dollar
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to your child, and tell him to spend it in a way
it
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that
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last
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lasts
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till the end of the month, he can not afford that as he does not have the skill and knowledge to do
such
a thing.
Therefore
, weak
countries
need
export
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to export
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people and
also
the culture of using the
money
in
a
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the
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most profitable way. In conclusion, not only do they need financial aid, but
also
the knowledge of spending it.
That is
how they can improve and have a developed
country
where their young forces can become an export themselves.
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