In some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buy one. What are some advantages and disadvantages renting a house?
Citizens of some countries are choosing to live in leased-out houses
instead
of purchased ones. This
profers benefits like,
less expenses and less responsibilities . Remove the comma
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On the other hand
, it could mean having to deal with co-existence,
and the unreliability of landlords.
A rented house requires less amount of money. Remove the comma
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This
is because the expense of a year's worth is divided across a span of twelve months and since people come and go into these houses they will be offered at cheaper prices than a brand new one
. In addition
, as a temporary occupant, one
is less responsible for the permanent state of a place. When in a space that does not competely
belong to someone, the repairs and the additional Correct your spelling
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up-keep
will still remain the sole priority of the landlord. Correct your spelling
upkeep
For instance
,during the rainy season in Nigeria, the government holds owners accountable for poor sewage constructions
and not those who only reside there.
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construction
In contrast
, people have to deal with neighbouring and all the baggage it comes with . Most shared spaces require co-existing with others and often
than not Correct quantifier usage
more often
this
involves disrespectful and nasty neighbours ,who could make living
hell. Another downside is the problem of those landladies or male equivalents, who Add an article
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take
random decisions without consulting their tenants. It is easy to comfortably make and create rules that serve Correct your spelling
make
one
without thinking of others provided that it does not in any way affect consistent rentals. For example
, many landlords in Lagos are notorious at
increasing monthly dues or even ordering ejection without prior notice.
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one
can save more ,and one
is also
not accountable for anything. On the downside, this
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