The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The plot illustrates a
process
of collection of precipitations and its treatment for usage as potable Use synonyms
water
in an Australian settlement.
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Overall
, the Linking Words
process
consists of several operations Use synonyms
such
as rainwater gathering from each house via a drainage system, a filtering Linking Words
process
, treatment with chemicals, and supplying the end user with drinking Use synonyms
water
.
The initial Use synonyms
process
starts from rainwater collection when it spills from rooves into the drainage system installed onto each house. The next phase is when the liquid from each building flows into a main pipe, which is tied into a filtering Use synonyms
process
where a massive stream passes through triple filter barriers. The clear Use synonyms
water
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then
, is flown Linking Words
further
to fill up a reservoir where Linking Words
water
is stored before chemical treatment starts.
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Furthermore
, chemical Linking Words
treament
is produced in the second tank which is fed by the Correct your spelling
treatment
water
from the storage reservoir. When the Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
treament
tank is full chemicals are prepared to be added one at a time and stirring is done to make sure chemicals are dissolved and the reaction is on. After a Correct your spelling
treatment
while
, the processed Linking Words
water
is pumped out to supply all Use synonyms
habitants
and Correct your spelling
habitats
vegetations
with pure drinking Fix the agreement mistake
vegetation
water
.Use synonyms
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