The table gives information about the average hours spent on the internet by European people of different age groups.

The table gives information about the average hours spent on the internet by European people of different age groups.
The
number
of
men
and
women
in Europe who use the
Internet
for extended periods of time is displayed in the table above. The most significant finding that grabs attention is that, with 18 more
women
than
men
, those between the ages of 16 and 20 are the ones who use the
Internet
the most. It was shown that the proportion of male and female
Internet
users started to decline after the year 21. It was discovered that, between the ages of 26 and 30, both
men
and
women
consistently spent four hours online.
Then
, in the remaining two stages of life, the
number
of
women
using the
Internet
started to rise, whilst the
number
of
men
started to steadily decline and eventually reached two. Among those aged 51 and beyond, the
number
of
women
climbed by one and reached three hours.
Overall
, it is evident that the 16–20 age bracket was when both males and females used the
internet
the most.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, men, women, internet with synonyms.
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