The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power.
The diagrams show a structure that
used
to generate Add a missing verb
is used
electrucuty
from Correct your spelling
electricity
wave
power.
There are shown two ways of generating electricity in diagram
A and B.
Diagram A Fix the agreement mistake
diagrams
show
that Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
wave
is going Correct article usage
a wave
inder
the chamber so air is going to Correct your spelling
in
column
, and helps Add an article
the column
a column
turbine
to spin. And it is the reason Correct article usage
the turbine
of
generating electricity.
As we can see in B diagram the structure is opposite of A. Change preposition
for
Wave
is going back so wave
takes air by vacuum, so turbine
is spinning Add an article
the turbine
with
the same direction. Air is going down from Change preposition
in
column
because Correct article usage
the column
wave
is Add an article
the wave
a wave
went
off.
In Wrong verb form
going
conclusion
we can see that generating in both phases is very useful.Add a comma
conclusion,
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