the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
The pie charts
displays
the Change the verb form
display
comparision
of various Correct your spelling
comparison
age
groups in the years
2000 and 2050 of two different countries Yemen and Italy. The overall
data shows that the young generation is being decreased
and there is a rise in the Wrong verb form
decreasing
age
of middle
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the middle
group
.
Firstly
in Yemen, half of the population
was covered by 0-14 years
in 2000, over the years
being increased the young age
group
has decreased to 37% in
the year 2050. Ages 15-59 lies between 46 Change preposition
by
percent
in 2000 and there is less amount of Change the spelling
per cent
people
who are above 60 years
while
compared to the future there is a slight increase in age
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the age
group
of 15-59 with a percent
of 57.3 and above 60 Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
has a small increase in the population
.
In Italy, the age
group
of youth and adults has more than half of the population
, 24 percent
of old Change the spelling
per cent
people
and less than one fourth
of Add a hyphen
one-fourth
people
in 2000, while
comparing this
to 2050 the older
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number of older
age
people
has
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have
the
increased to 42% and the adults and youth Correct article usage
apply
age
group
is being decreased to 46 percent
. Comparing the two countries the 15 to 59 Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
has
more Wrong verb form
had
population
than any other age
groups
in 2000 and it is being increased to more in 2050.Fix the agreement mistake
group
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