the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

the charts below give information on the ages of  the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
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The pie charts
displays
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the
comparision
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comparison
of various
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groups in the
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2000 and 2050 of two different countries Yemen and Italy. The
overall
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data shows that the young generation is
being decreased
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and there is a rise in the
age
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of
middle
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the middle
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group
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.
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in Yemen, half of the
population
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was covered by 0-14
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in 2000, over the
years
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being increased the young
age
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group
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has decreased to 37%
in
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the year 2050. Ages 15-59 lies between 46
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percent
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in 2000 and there is less amount of
people
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who are above 60
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while
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compared to the future there is a slight increase in
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age
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the age
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group
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of 15-59 with a
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percent
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of 57.3 and above 60
age
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group
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has a small increase in the
population
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. In Italy, the
age
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group
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of youth and adults has more than half of the
population
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, 24
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percent
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per cent
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of old
people
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and less than
one fourth
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one-fourth
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of
people
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in 2000,
while
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comparing
this
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to 2050 the
older
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number of older
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age
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people
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has
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the
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increased to 42% and the adults and youth
age
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group
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is being decreased to 46
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percent
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per cent
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. Comparing the two countries the 15 to 59
age
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group
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has
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had
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more
population
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than any other
age
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groups
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in 2000 and it is being increased to more in 2050.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years, group, population, percent, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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