The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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The given pie charts

demostrate

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demonstrate

the

rate

of five types of

books

sold from 1972 to 2012.

Overall

, it can be seen that the

rate

of fiction

books

either for adults or children rose,

depite

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despite

the

percantage

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percentage

of biography

books

decreased

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. Meanwhile, the figure of travel

books

zig-zagged throughout the

period

. In detail, the most significant increase belonged

the

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to the

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category of

adult’s

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adult

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fiction

books

, which increased more

then

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than

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doubled over the

period

. The

rate

of children’s fiction

was

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gradually rose, from 20

percent

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per cent

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to 25

percent

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per cent

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. Turning to the trend of decline, the

percantage

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percentage

of biography

books

remarkably decreased over the time frame, which

was

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represented one in fifth in 1972 and dropped to 8%. In terms of the

rate

of solded travel

books

, a fluctuation was seen between 1972 and 2012, with a slight 3% increase in the first 30 years, and a decline from 18% to 10 % from 1992 to the end of the

period

Additionally

, the proportion of the others category was shown a decline, which represented a quarter in the

beginnig

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beginning

and dropped by almost half over the

period

and accounted for 12

percent

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per cent

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in 2012.

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

An increasing number of developing countries are expanding tourist industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

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