The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012
The given pie charts
demostrate
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demonstrate
the
rate
of five types of
books
sold from 1972 to 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
rate
of fiction
books
either for adults or children rose,
depite
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despite
the
percantage
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percentage
of biography
books
decreased
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. Meanwhile, the figure of travel
books
zig-zagged throughout the
period
. In detail, the most significant increase belonged
the
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category of
adult’s
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fiction
books
, which increased more
then
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doubled over the
period
. The
rate
of children’s fiction
was
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gradually rose, from 20
percent
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to 25
percent
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. Turning to the trend of decline, the
percantage
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percentage
of biography
books
remarkably decreased over the time frame, which
was
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represented one in fifth in 1972 and dropped to 8%. In terms of the
rate
of solded travel
books
, a fluctuation was seen between 1972 and 2012, with a slight 3% increase in the first 30 years, and a decline from 18% to 10 % from 1992 to the end of the
period
.
Additionally
, the proportion of the others category was shown a decline, which represented a quarter in the
beginnig
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beginning
and dropped by almost half over the
period
and accounted for 12
percent
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in 2012.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.

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